User:JosephineHriscu/Esther Brandeau/Emilyg01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JosephineHriscu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JosephineHriscu/Esther Brandeau
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Esther Brandeau

Evaluate the drafted changes
I definitely feel like your additions would make this article more complete. I think the background you provided really helps to better explain Brandeau's situation and why she did what she did. I also think you have a really good list of sources. The only improvements I'd suggest would be to add more links to other wikipedia articles, like articles about Jews, Christopher Columbus, etc., and to add photos. Overall, I think this is a well written draft!