User:Joshtillmord/Gender dysphoria in children/SuzySchaffer Peer Review

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General info

 * Joshtillmord
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Joshtillmord/sandbox

Content being Evaluated
Gender dysphoria is a DSM-5 diagnosis categorized by transgender and gender expansive individuals feeling discontent between their gender identity and their sex assigned at birth. Transgender and gender expansive youth are more at risk for developing depression, anxiety, other mental health issues, and suicidality linked to gender dysphoria and externals stressors. A way to reduce these stressors is to use a youth's preferred pronoun(s) and name(s).

Evaluations
Hey Josh! I see you're adding a Managing Stressors section which I think is great! I think this is an important part of the Gender Dysphoria article to include a way to manage societal stressors that can lead to further dysphoria in transgender and gender expansive youth. I would expand more on the positive outcomes of peers/loved ones/etc. being affirming and more ways for family to be affirming towards a child. I would also expand on additional stressors related if it isn't too repetative related to the rest of the article. Great work so far!

-Suzanne