User:JoshuaBurton2002/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Anime

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I am fascinated with anime. I want to be able to share it with all the people I care about and I want all the information to be accurate and helpful.

Evaluate the article
The introduction is good because it explains a lot about what anime is and how it was originated, but the opening paragraphs do not explain what information is contained in the rest of the article. I believe that the content is strong and the article contains a lot of content, but I think there can be a bit more explained in some of the topics towards the end of the article. There is one small paragraph about awards in the middle which can be upgraded to a few more paragraphs to explain how some of the popular animes have won a bunch of awards. The content is pretty up to date, but there are some instances where more can be provided. There can be more about the market or working conditions as well as the media franchises. The article is pretty neutral there is no bias towards anything within the content listed. There is no persuasion within the article. The sources are good to explain the information, and there are multiple sources for each paragraph to ensure correct and factual information. The links in the article do work. The talk page has some information from a few weeks abo about some edits. People are just adding more information to better enhance the article. Anime is a level four vital article in art and wikipedia wants people to include more information to strengthen this article. I think it has a lot of good information displayed that is clear and easy to read. The way to help this article is not to review and change what is already written, but to do some more research and add more information to the weaker parts of the article. There can be a few more images put in to really drill in to your brain what you are reading to make it even easier to comprehend and give some more visuals on what you are reading about. New sources should be discovered to be able to provide good quality information to help enrich this article.