User:JoshuaERS/Military base/Littlee0804 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

JoshuaERS


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JoshuaERS/Military_base?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Military base

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello,

I think you did a great job! This is an article with a clear structure including a general paragraph and several subheadings, a fair distribution of content length to tell the background of each section, and three nice pictures. I think it's perfect and very well done. In the introduction, not only is the environmental damage of the military bases categorized, but also a beneficial impact is mentioned and the adaptation efforts of the US Armed Forces are included. This is a very neutral, unbiased article in line with Wikipedia. However, I think it would have been nice to have some more discussion of the environmental impacts of military bases in other countries. After all, the United States is the largest military spender in the world, and other countries may build and use military bases in different and more environmentally unfriendly ways than the United States for funding reasons. Resulting in a greater environmental disaster.