User:JoshuaERS/Military base/ReubenLi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * JoshuaERS
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JoshuaERS/Military base
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Military base

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think both the lead and content of your draft is an excellent addition to the original article, however, a few sections rely on a single reference (e.g. lead paragraph, Impacts of Construction, & Impacts from Training to Testing). I suggest working with two or more peer reviewed articles to strengthen your lead, or finding a reputable news source that can improve the credibility of your points.

Throughout your draft, it is evident that the use of reputable references and ability to accurately depict the following content in your lead section supported by recently published sources highlights the quality of your draft. Although it is difficult to find relevant but accessible images for your draft, I think you have done a good job implementing images and organizing these with your draft.

Implementing hyperlinks, highlighting terminology using italics, 'main articles' section underneath each subheading, etc. are subtle details that you can incorporate into your draft.

If you want, you can include a section for 'public perception', 'criticisms', or 'backlash' to bring multiple perspectives on the issue. Or include a history/geography section to present the ongoing debate on military bases - environmental impact.

Adding 'mitigation' to Adaptation Efforts would help balance your draft, which is usually used in the case of climate change, however, exploring the potential climatic influences on military bases such as heat waves (on different materials), soil erosion, and other forms of degradation subjected to climate change would make your draft more comprehensive.

I suggest adding additional bulk/content to the current sections of the article page (e.g. Overseas military base, Related term, See also, etc.), and adopt a writing style that would synergize your draft to the current version. This could be done through rephrasing your own draft or editing the original article.