User:Joshuapak11/Free clinic/JG2027 Peer Review

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Joshuapak11
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Hi Joshua, I really enjoyed exploring more about the services and work that's provided at the free clinic. A lot of the information that was added was written in a non-biased way which I believe is important so that readers are able to conjure up their own assumptions.

I see that you did some restructuring and reorganizing. These changes made the article flow more cohesively, great job! I do have some concerns regarding the information that you added to your sandboxes. I would like some clarification if the the sentences that you added were re-written information, or if it was new information that was added to the article. I didn't see any information cited.

I pleasantly enjoyed reading the last part of your article regarding the effectiveness of free clinics. The information that you added to your article was very straightforward. I would try to go back and make the sentences clearer, but currently, they get the message across in an effective way.

Lastly, there are minor tweaks that can be improved, but overall, amazing job on the article. You did a great job keeping your possible biases aside and keeping the information straightforward.