User:Josie Hoffman/sandbox

Exploitation of women in mass media has made people view men and women in social media as objects and not real people says Jamie Swift from the Huff Post article. Many young boys and girls have grown up with insecurities starting at a young age because of the way that men and women are portrayed in pictures that show men and women who are "sexy" or "beautiful". Males and females go to great lengths to make themselves "beautiful" or "sexy" in the worlds eyes some cases may be that they dissolve an eating disorder says Hannah Gould from UNICEF USA article. Girls are also starting to grow up with anxiety about appearance, shame, depression and low self-esteem Gould goes on to say. While men are working there bodies too hard and taking substances to enhance there physical fitness appearance. Swift states that men see how their bodies are portrayed and causes them to feel that the way to success is with "dominance, power, and aggression." The exploitation of Men on social media is just as present as woman in social media and both genders are effected by it.

It should be "exploitation" not "exploration" of women. Your sources look pretty good, and I like the information concept. You'll need to edit for correct grammar and punctuation. Also think about where this would fit on the WP article page; you might need to add explanation or introduction to integrate it into what's already there. JAirhart 23:41, 6 March 2019 (UTC)