User:Josiehar/Epigenetics of autoimmune disorders/Amseger Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article has a very strong lead that defines the topic well. The article covers a lot of different subtopics that still fit under epigenetics and autoimmune disease. In fact, the different paragraph do a good job in explaining why they fit within the topic given. Although the existing content is well-written and well organized, the article could always use an image or two. This can provide more visual aids that can enhance the overall article.

For the references, There are a few sources from 2014 and 2015, which currently is now almost nine and ten years ago. To improve the article, one could switch these out and use more updated sources. This helps improve the overall content in the different bodies of the article.