User:Josiehar/Epigenetics of autoimmune disorders/Bsmith02 Peer Review

It is good that you all have started editing. The one thing I would criticize is that I only see where one person has made an edit, or at least denoted that an edit has been made so there should probably be more editing going on. It does, however look like the group is going in the right direction with the assignments.

General info
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Evaluate the drafted changes
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