User:Josiesch/Exploitation of women in mass media/Gillian Rens Peer Review

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Kyle
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Josiesch/Exploitation of women in mass media/Bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Exploitation of women in mass media

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I love this topic and think it is such a prevalent problem in our world today. Great sources to provide insight more into rape myths and truly what is it and why it is, really underscoring the damages and impacts rape myths can make. The standards the world has for something to be "true" need to be debunked so more women can be heard. To help people further understand the terms being used possibly provide a quick definition of "rape myths" and possibly examples. Possibly touch more on specific cases to back up and provide insight to that real problem this is.