User:Josiesch/Sex trafficking/Meye29 Peer Review

General info
Josiesch
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
Is the content neutral and relevant?

I think the content is neutral and relevant. It's well written and informative while not trying to be argumentative. I like the addition of Criminalizing and Legalizing Prostitution as it is provides a new view while also staying relevant to the topic.

Sources:

The source used is reliable and up to date. The only thing to do is to add two additional sources. I'm not sure what you're plan is but I do think you could dive deeper into sex work as a whole if you wanted to.

Overall:

I think this is a really good draft! All that's really needed is two additional sources.