User:Josiesch/Sex trafficking/Sarahcs12 Peer Review

General info
Josiesch
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Josiesch/Sex trafficking
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sex trafficking

Evaluate the drafted changes
The main thing that has been added to the sandbox is the section "criminalizing and legalizing prostitution". I think this section is written well, informative, and neutral. It is also relevant to the article, up to date, and I think something that is very important and needs to be added to the article. The lead has not yet been edited, but based on the section that was added I think the lead will be very informative. There is only one source so far, but I think the source is reliable. I look forward to seeing the progression of this article.