User:Joslyn8/Cookie dough/Jayla987 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joslyn8


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cookie dough


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cookie dough

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

So, I'm reviewing what Joslyn8 added to the article (there's no draft).

One source was added to the article, the source is reliable. The part added talks about what heat treatment is and why it is used. There are no grammar issues nor spelling issues. The part added is easy to read and understand.

The article structure is good there are many different sections. But, each section does stay on topic.

Maybe edit the part of the article that talks about people investigating how to enjoy cookie dough without sacrificing their health.