User:Jossepphine/Annie Besant/Cjoson100 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jossepphine


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Annie Besant


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Annie Besant

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead was done quite nicely and has a good amount of information.

The content was detailed and explained in a nice flow.

For the tone and balance, there were a few biased sounding sentences but not too much. There are some sentences such as "...the marriage was a disaster."

With the sources I have checked, each seem to be very reliable and come straight from Annie Besant's journals and books. The links I have tried out, they do work.

Overall, I think the article was very detailed and well explained, however, there are still quite a bit of grammar mistakes that need added punctuation.