User:JouBurkeC/Magazine Street/Miss.Anieya Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(User:JouBurkeC/Magazine Street)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:JouBurkeC/Magazine Street


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:JouBurkeC/Magazine Street

Evaluate the drafted changes
The last sentence of the intro should be a little more neutral. Also overall is much less than 500 words. The article introduces the demographics and history very well and is greatly neutral. What impressed me the most was the constructed paragraph about the demographics of Magazine St.. The history of the street could've been explained a bit clearer. I would suggest changing the into of the Magazine st. and add more to make it longer. These changes would be an improvement by adding a bigger 500 word counts and a better intro to the draft.