User:Joyb3/Experimental psychology/BrookeCarr01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joyb3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Joyb3/Experimental_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Experimental psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Bekah!

You have a great start to editing this article! I like where you have added links to existing Wiki articles for some of the people and experiments you have mentioned. I don't have too many suggestions right off the bat. There is a missing comma in the sentence just after introducing Stanley Milgram between "In both experiments" and "ordinary individuals." I also suggest being careful with wordiness like "very strongly." Your citations are pretty dated, so I would suggest adding in a reference within the past five years if possible.