User:Joycecs/Entropy (information theory)/Happyboi2489 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joycecs


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Entropy (information theory)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Entropy (information theory)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I saw most of the editing you did for this article focused on the lead. After reading the lead paragraphs, I think they are very well formatted. However, I think this paragraph, "The entropy was originally created by Shannon as part of his theory of communication,...Shannon strengthened this result considerably for noisy channels in his noisy-channel coding theorem." could maybe be shortened? It feels too detailed as a paragraph in the introduction section, and maybe could be separated to be a subsection of the article?

Also I notice an abundance of equation and mathematical formula in this article, but relatively low number of graphical representation for visualizing the concepts for this article, looking for an image or two to add into the article to explain some concepts could be helpful for readers unfamiliar with the subject.

Verbal examples on the application of some of the model properties mentioned in the article would be helpful for understanding too.