User:Joycecs/Entropy (information theory)/J47211 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joycecs


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Joycecs/Entropy_(information_theory)?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Entropy (information theory)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Joycecs has made some minor edits on the grammar and sentence structure in the opening paragraph on 15 October 2021. My suggestions would be:

1) Different spacing between sections could be made consistent. For example, the spacing between the end of Introduction and beginning of the Definition section is obviously larger than others spacings.

2) Adding the missing in-text citation. For example, the quote under the Efficiency (normalized entropy) section.

3)There is a lot of detailed explaining in this wiki page, you could consider using tables or figures to make this page look more concise.

Gook luck!