User:Joycecs/Entropy (information theory)/Pinkfrog22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joycecs


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Entropy (information theory)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Entropy (information theory)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead section is quite long with examples and history - while this user has already edited grammar and clarity, it may be helpful to create a more concise lead section. Giving units in the lead section is also extremely confusing and unneccesary. Most of the edits Joycecs has made so far are in the lead section, and are really great. It is very difficult to begin to clean up a messy article. There are other users actively editing this page, so maybe having a talk coversation about the lead section could be helpful. I would also suggest not focusing all of the attention on the lead section and working throughout the article, as it is quite substantial, as well.

Content

The content in this article is great. There are many different examples and extensions of entropy. Please see sources for more notes on this.

Sources and References

Many of the examples and extensions are not cited. Most of the subsections under "Aspects" do not have any citationa accosicated with them at all. I would try to focus on finding citations for this. Some of these subsections also only have one or two sentences, which makes me question their reliability/presence in good sources.

Images and Media

There are so many equations. While they are useful, and closer to the bottom, graphs or animations could be helpful. There are many animations that show entropy, and this could be good to put in the lead section as well.