User:Joyxjoukhadar/Voting Accessibility for the Elderly and Handicapped Act/Lacascia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Joyxjoukhadar, 29kvaldez, Claireschulberg, Dochoa24, Danimwa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Voting Accessibility for the Elderly and Handicapped Act
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Voting Accessibility for the Elderly and Handicapped Act

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think this article is very well organized thus far. I like the various headings. That being said, I do think while the terminology section is in essence helpful, I don't think it is entirely relevant to the case itself and represents research folks could do on their own. Thus, I do not think it is a necessary section and it is slightly distracting. Moreover, I think the sources are appropriate and functional. I think the article looks neutral, and it is informative.