User:Jparada210/Positive behavior interventions and supports/Colleenrushnak Peer Review

Hi Colleen!

Thank you so much for your insightful feedback. I will take your suggestion of adding to the introduction of the article and to include more evidence from peer reviewed journals. I will also take into consideration the point you made about some vocabulary used in the paragraph related to "Continuum of support" and making it more easily accessible to a non-teacher reader who may not be very familiar with common vocabulary used in the education field. I appreciate the support and feedback. Thank you for your time and consideration.

- Julia Parada

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: NA. Just an observation looking at the lead of the original article, perhaps there is room to add more references in the lead? There is a LOT of information that I think could have references.

Content: I think your addition was really good and could open up to a conversation on mental health and positive behavior interventions. Maybe you could add a new section to the article about effects on student mental health. Just as a suggestion- not sure on this 100%- but for me, the Continuum of support paragraph was a little confusing. I am not familiar with that term and I imagine most non educators are, so I would suggest maybe defining what that means or expanding upon it a little more?

Tone and balance: Overall, the tone is very neutral.

Sources and References: Good job using a source that is recent (2015) and from a reputable journal! This helps to strengthen the overall article.

Organization: Overall, nicely organized article! Off to a good start.