User:Jphansen34/American Impressionism/Nbrasch Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Username of reviewee: Jphansen34


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jphansen34/American Impressionism/Bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * American Impressionism

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Initial page has very few sources given overview and nature of topic -> Jphansen34 bibliography includes handful of reliable sources with working links that will address this gap

- Jphansen34 adds citations where original article makes claims without support of source; very important and improves strength of article

- Original page has references & sources as seperate headings -> perhaps check out legitimacy of sources in both and combine?

- Add more in-line citations!!!

- Move "Characteristics of American Impressionism" heading earlier? Seems odd to stick at end

- Potentially link to more Wiki articles to make more discoverable