User:Jpoiry/sandbox

Article Evaluation
The article being evaluated is one on Kevin McCarthy. While everything in the article is relevant to the article and makes sense and is not distracting, I find that there doesn't seem to be enough on his personal life. The article is very information packed, just has maybe a what would qualify as a paragraph on his personal life, also it is placed at the very end of the article, whereas normally that section is placed at the beginning along with the early life section. The article was largely unbiased, though I find it humorous that in the "social media censorship" section it talks about conservative/republic Wikipedia pages being edited and changed with a bias against them. The one thing that may be a little over-represented in the article would be his stand against same sex marriage and other discussions on the subject. The citation links i attempted were all in a functional order, though some of them i would not classify as "scholarly", such as one is the CNN website. Though there are plenty that are, just not for everything. Also, websites such as CNN tend to be more biased, towards one party or another, and this is not noted in the text or anywhere that i could find. As for the talk page, most are discussing edits that people have made and are rather minor, nothing discussing anything really major besides less emphasis on pointless topics that have since been revised. It is also part of three wiki projects: Biography/polotics and government, california/state university, U.S. Congress. The article has an average C-class rating.

article idea topics
Presidential Food Service, not much is here on this topic, I'm sure I can find something more.

references (practice)
"Wiki Education Dashboard". dashboard.wikiedu.org. Retrieved 2018-09-22.

Draft
Article original:Office of the Pardon Attorney

Steps and Process
(unknown as to what heading it would be placed under)

The Office of the Pardon Attorney's purpose is to handle all and every clemency related correspondence and issue, including those such as petitions and applications. There is several steps by which they do this.

The first step of the Office's job is to receive the clemency correspondences, and review them. They go on to investigate the further, the applications along with whatever files were sent with in order to make more valid the requester's plea for pardoning. They then formulate a recommendation for each application, and send them on to for final decision by the president as to whether or not give them a pardon. As of current, Larry Kupers holds the position of Deputy Pardon Attorney, and William Taylor II holds the executive officer position.