User:Jpow05/Adult attention deficit hyperactivity disorder/Priyaraymond Peer Review

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Adult attention deficit hyperactivity disorder
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In the 1970s, researchers began to realize replace with understand that the condition now known as ADHD, did not always disappear in adolescence, as was once previously thought to dissipate during adolescence, could persist into adulthood.T he expansion of the definition for ADHD beyond only being a condition experienced by children was mainly accomplished by refocusing the diagnosis on inattention instead of  Maybe say " This realization led to a broader definition of ADHD, emphasizing inattention over hyperactivity." At about the same time, some of the symptoms were also noted in many parents of the children under treatment. 'Around the same time period, many parents were displaying some of the similar symptoms as the children who were undergoing treatment. Having this correlation between the parent and child indicates that biological factors may play a role in the inheritance of ADHD.' Instead maybe say "Concurrently, many parents of children receiving treatment for ADHD exhibited similar symptoms, suggesting a potential biological basis for the inheritance of the disorder."