User:Jramos1299/Female education in STEM/Kassidydn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jramos1299


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jramos1299/Female education in STEM


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Female education in STEM

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * For the first section in your Sandbox I would avoid saying "some studies" and also include a citation.
 * I would also include citations throughout the other parts. For mine, I had a source for essentially every sentence.
 * These are all good and necessary details that the article topic. Good job!
 * I like your various comparisons between girls and boys in STEM. This is a great base edit.