User:Jreale1/Pauline Hopkins/Gmenezchahade Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(jereale1)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jreale1/Pauline_Hopkins?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pauline Hopkins
 * Pauline Hopkins

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lede in your article is good. Overall, the edits done on the Pauline Hopkins page were good, as the additional information contributed to the article. I liked how you added information Hopkins' maternal ancestry traces back to famous New-Hampshire natives. The information on how Frederick Douglass inspired Pauline Hopkins is also essential. Your organization is great! I feel as though your main contribution to the Wikipedia page right now is the information on Hopkins' final notable work with the Colored American Magazine. The content added is relevant to the page and neutral in tone. One suggestion I have is to add more information on Pauline Hopkins' legacy and early life section. In the legacy section, you could add more information on how her work was received by the public and other writers at the time and in the present.