User:Jreeves0612/East Matagorda Bay/Amtorres24 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?  Ethane177, Jreeves0612
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: East Matagorda Bay

Review by Adams Torres:
As of what is presented of East Matagorda Bay within the wikipedia page, there is much information still necessary of improvement. There seems to be a good lead and introductory format to the written form of the work that collaborates properly with the images. With this said, the content added in terms of pictures and links is very little. I would suggest adding more detailed images and descriptions of these images to further develop the denotation of Matagorda. In relation to the content, the writing seems to be neutral, which is good. I would avoid being biased to a side when describing this article and formulate ideas around unbiased viewpoints that describe Matagorda around its environmental purpose so that the tone isn't too one sided. The organization and imagery is very well conducted, but more is needed to provide background lead into information that is necessary for explanation.

Overall, the Article seems to be off to a great start, but of course more information is needed for a deeper evaluation of the topic. As I said previously, I suggest adding more unbiased opinions and sets of images that will coincide with the information appropriately.