User:Jrfo232/Dialect Discrimination/Gracie Edelen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jrfo232


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jrfo232/Dialect_Discrimination?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great start here! One suggestion that was very helpful to me is that you can go to the citation button at the top, copy the link of the source, and then change the words that are shown on the article. This makes it easy for readers to directly click a link of a certain topic, and makes your article more organized as there won't be citation everywhere. Also, I see you are still working, but make sure that you divide and properly label your paragraphs. Everything else looks good, just make sure to put in more citation links within the article on not previously known information.