User:Jrjossart/Saprotrophic Bacteria/Wahoobbs!! Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I'm review Jrjossart's sandbox draft on Saprotrophic bacteria.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jrjossart/Saprotrophic Bacteria
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Saprotrophic nutrition

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

It looks like this draft needs a little bit more work, but I think compared to the page on saprotrophic nutrition this is a good specific topic to branch to. I think you have a great first source, albeit a little dated. I might suggest finding some newer papers or articles on saprotrophic bacteria or their specific role as you mention as decomposers. I believe the work you have now is meant to be your lead? If so, try to expand a bit further in the lead and use the specific info in the lead to setup the rest of the article. I like how you've included many links to other wiki pages within the work you have so far. Good luck with expanding on your page!