User:Jrm15/SayHerName/Mandy2890 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jrm15


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jrm15/SayHerName
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * SayHerName

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead includes factual information about the #SayHerName concept and have a detailed response in adding to the mothers network section. There were some punctual errors as well. Leaving the website blue could be a great access so people can go straight to the website. The content is relevant to the present and added new information about to the article and remaining neutral in the sandbox draft. The content has improved the quality of the article and the section the content is in because it gave a more understanding of the rest of the section. The mothers's network section looked to have been missing a lead before the edit. A picture would have gave a visual insight about that section.