User:Jrollet33/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Physical fitness

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen this article because physical fitness is an important aspect of living a great life. I have recently lost fifty pounds due to my commitment towards my physical fitness. I also want to find evidence that physical fitness ties into enhancing our education in children. The article describes fitness as a means of dealing with difficult situations. The mental benefits of being physically fit could help students cognitive abilities, enhancing learning. Overall, impression is this article is well organized with headlines, great pictures, and great explanations of how being physically fit can change your life in multiple ways.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article is well composed according to the guidelines. It describes what sections and characteristics are going to be described. The lead-in article is clear and concise. The article is well balanced that does not share bias while describing multiple characteristics. This article shares the historical value of physical fitness. I do believe the article is as centered as it can be. Physical fitness accurately changes lives in many ways and describing the ways does not make this author biased. They are merely stating facts with historical and modern data. Some sources are within twenty years and some are historical in nature. There are over sixty sources listed and the links do work when selecting them. Each picture is listed with a source. The pictures show what the article is stating. It does show folks whose bodies may not be completely attainable by everyone, but it does show what physically fit people look like. The talk page backs my claims about the photos being unattainable. Some claim they are useless and photoshopped. There is a suggestion to break the categories into areas that are more common in physical fitness. The overall article details how physical fitness can help change your life in multiple aspects but it does not show what an average adult can do to define it at their age. I believe it could be better adapted for common individuals to understand and apply.