User:Jropeach/Alice Wu/Ayee667 Peer Review

Peer review
Hello,

I have a few suggestions for your article Alice Wu. First, the introductory paragraph is too vague and unclear. The readers should get some more information about this filmmaker. This article lacks structure and content, a clear example is the Filmography, it does not have enough history of the filmmaker's work. I would suggest you do much research and add on to this filmmaker. I would suggest you make a table for this, that way you can name her work, dates and her position in that film. I have added more information to her personal life and also her filmography.

Another thing, try to refer the name of the filmmaker as you write your article, make sure you spell her name correctly and use caps.

Thanks!