User:Jrrwfw/Human zoo/Amarie2003 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jrrwfw


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Jrrwfw/Human zoo - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Human zoo - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft has an engaging lead section that consists of a quote. The draft also has a clear structure that is outlined by the subsection headers. This draft's content is neutral and includes reliable sources such as, two peer-reviewed articles and one of those articles was from a Filipino person who focused on Philippine Studies. The suggestions you made about how these sections from the article should be changed are changes that I completely agree with. Are you planning to add to the second section that human zoos existed to study and other people who were not white in order to identify "race characteristics"?