User:Jruhbc/Green infrastructure/Cadillard1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing Jruhbc's work.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jruhbc/sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green infrastructure

Evaluate the drafted changes
The historical additions to the article are highly relevant and even correct the original article which is great to see! I think one challenge to keep in mind when continuing to find sources and historical uses of green infrastructure is to separate out the why and the what. The original article seems to focus more on the what is green infrastructure and you are doing a good job on looking at the why. Being as it seems politically based, it is important to be extra careful with the reasons and sources for those reasons. Speaking of sources, it seems you have found quality sources as is. My only other piece of advice is to keep the main ideas in mind and do not get lost in too many smaller instances or details since it seems like you have a lot of ideas and points of reference. Great start overall!