User:Jruhbc/Green infrastructure/Epbvx6 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jruhbc


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jruhbc/Green_infrastructure?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It is good to see that you have a couple sources that were made into citations (something I need to do for my own). It looks like your sandbox is starting to be nicely organized with sections for references and some notes or the beginning of a draft. However, there are really only a couple of lines about Green Infrastructure that contain a lot of spelling errors that you'll need to go back and fix. I don't feel like it flows very well, because, while reading it, it feels like you're just listing off some facts. I see that you're talking about the history of Green Infrastructure, maybe find some information on people who started this and/or why they believe this was important to cities. It's also good to see that you're adding/ linking citations to the end of your sentences.