User:Jruhbc/Green infrastructure/Ktournillon Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jruhbc


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jruhbc/Green infrastructure
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Green infrastructure

Evaluate the drafted changes
It seems like you created this 17th century history section from scratch; I love that! A lot of the Green Infrastructure article is focused on a modern context, so adding earlier history rounds out the article very nicely. You have a good start to the section. Because the definition of Green Infrastructure in the header introduces the topic in terms of "solving urban and climactic challenges," it might be helpful to introduce this new 17th century section in a similar way. Rather than France using the presence of nature to provide social and spatial organization, consider introducing the challenges associated with such organization, then provide some detail as to how France tackled these problems using nature. This could help highlight the benefits of Green Infrastructure, even in its earliest stages. There are spelling errors present in this sandbox that are fixed in the actual article, so it would appear these have been addressed. Great start, I look forward to seeing how the section continues throughout the semester. Ktournillon (talk) 20:16, 20 March 2022 (UTC)