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Article Evaluation

The Chrysanthemums


 * there is a lot of unnecessary details in what Elisa is doing and saying
 * overall is unbiased
 * links do work however they're insufficent
 * some of the references are from colleges and other studies
 * could add how she is really alone and her husband doesn't pay much attention to her except when she is "confident"
 * the talk page mentions how the summary doesn't go in depth of characters also that it needs to be clean up and his hard to use
 * the editor of the summary uses the word "homosexual" to refer to her husband and it is too controversial for a summary