User:Jsdorsey/Gun Control Act of 1968/Nharkdivad Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jsdorsey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jsdorsey/Gun_Control_Act_of_1968?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gun Control Act of 1968
 * Gun Control Act of 1968

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the article body, include a legislative history section that will outline the history of your bill. Add a provisions section that shows what provisions your bill had and a description of those provisions. Clean up the provision you have already by including subheadings so that it is a little easier to follow. Include citations in your written text that can be traced back to the sources that you used. You could also include a background section with a subheading that goes into more detail about why the bill was introduced.