User:Jsealy18/1675–1676 Malta plague epidemic/Kaitlynnehafer Peer Review

This is a very detailed article that has a lot of information. Due to the years that this was present I am unsure if it can be updated to reflect more recent times but if you can find a article to reflect new findings or studies to prove some theories that would be a good addition.The lead covers all five points listed and required to make a good article. Cemeteries and religious beliefs are an interesting point in the article but it is slightly long and doesn’t connect to the virus as an overall point. That could be updated to recent times since they are still present. There are plenty of sources and they all seem reliable. I could add a section that resembles a conclusion that covers all the key points listed throughout the article. The article is close to almost being complete

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