User:Jsealy18/1675–1676 Malta plague epidemic/Oneton III Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Malta Epidemic


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: no changes listed here, but the existing lead is pretty thorough.

Content: geographic and Maltese background is an excellent addition; it will provide important context. Could you also include some plague background to contextual things? Or at least at links to articles for concurrent outbreaks? The transmission and symptoms info could be integrated with this as well. Are there any lasting cultural impacts you could discuss? The current article has art inspired by the epidemic, could you add info about that type of influence?

Tone and balance: Not much to judge here, but the info you're adding sounds balanced.

Sources and references: You're got a good list of sources to add in. Are there any major biases to them?

Organization: Really like your re-organizational plans; I think they'll improve the overall flow of the article.

Images and media: Adding a map would be great for contextualizing the areas discussed. What type of chart were you thinking?

Overall impressions: The changes you're planning seem well thought out and a good fit for the article!