User:Jselod/Madrepora oculata/REVPH Peer Review

General info
Username: Julia Serra
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Madrepora oculata - This group made their edits directly on the Wikipedia Page.
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Madrepora oculata

Lead Feedback:
The Lead on this Wikipedia Page has an introductory sentence that clearly describes the article's topic. The Lead has a couple of sentences that communicate to the audience what will be discussed regarding this topic: Description, Reproduction, Hypertrophy. The Lead does not include any information that is not present in the rest of the article. The Lead does a nice job of highlighting the important characteristics to be associated with Madrepora oculata.

Content Feedback:
My peer has spent some time copyediting the Description section of the Wikipedia page. My peer also did some work in the Reproduction section of this Wikipedia Page. There is no added content that does not belong. I believe that 1-2 more sentences could be added to the Lead section encompassing the two main ideas discussed in the Description section of the article.

Tone and Balance Feedback:
The content added is neutral. This article seems to be written in an objective manner.

Sources and References Feedback:
In the Description section that my peer worked on, in-text citations are present. This section cites Reference 1, 3, and 4. The link does not work for Reference 1. The links for References 3 and 4 do work. The content accurately reflects what References 3 and 4 say. These two sources reflect the available literature on the topic. The sources are written by a diverse spectrum of authors.

Organization Feedback:
The content added in the Description section is concise and easy to read. The content added is well organized and broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic. The Description section describes the fragile nature of this deep sea coral while also discussing a protective mechanism that this organism has evolved over time. I appreciated how this section of the Wikipedia Page is structured.

Images and Media Feedback:
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