User:Jshelby9/Pitt–Hopkins syndrome/Pbary psych Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jshelby9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pitt–Hopkins syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
It looks like you've added symptoms that are commonly reported in cases of children which look good! Here are a few things you could look to edit.


 * The history section is very light and I think it could be expanded on.
 * The treatment section is also pretty light, I think you could add how specific types of therapy help with specific conditions.