User:Jshelby9/Pitt–Hopkins syndrome/Thatbaddie205 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jshelby9/Pitt%E2%80%93Hopkins_syndrome?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pitt–Hopkins syndrome

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Jackie!

When I first began reading your edits, I had a hard time deciphering which contributions you made to the article. I am assuming that you added the "Commonly Reported Dysmorphic Characteristics in Children" part? If so I think it was a good part to add considering that the original article only had the general characters listed. Also I would say to add a citation there as well. Also there were just a few grammatical errors like the words "philtrum" and Dysmorphic. The only reason I say that is because my computer read it as a spelling error. I would suggest to add how genes can result to this type of disorder. Overall good contribution!