User:Jsihra2023/The Synthetic Collective/ATireOnFire Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jsihra2023


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Jsihra2023/The Synthetic Collective


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
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This is excellent work. It is well-written, centers the figures associated with the collective and their work expertly, and is written in a clear style. We discussed the prospect of moving the locational data (i.e.: Southwestern Ontario, where the project is predominantly facilitated) in front of the description of the works themselves but as I recall we left the merits of that change undecided. This is essentially ready for publication barring the author's decision to move the locational data or to leave it where it is currently.