User:Jsnarr/Three Dreams in a Desert/Abbie.grieser Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jsnarr


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://outlook.office.com/mail/inbox/id/AAQkADdhY2IyM2Y5LWNkNWItNDY3MS1hMTRiLWI2YTE0MWJhNDUxYwAQAPLA%2BnbyyU1DjHkAErJrxQg%3D
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Title of the short story needs to be bold in the Lead section.

Summary of the story is well-written and very easy to comprehend what the short story is about.

The critical reception still needs to be added.

Love how you added the characters section to give us more understanding.

References look like the are correct and in the right order.

Overall, what is written sounds really good, just need to work more on the critical reception part.