User:Jsquid555

About me
I am a full time college student who lives in the PNW "...it is one of the prime areas in the world for whale-watching, especially for orcas. ". I enjoy learning about sciences, about the internet, and about video game development. I am also a huge fan of the Twilight Saga by Stephenie Meyer. When I am not at school, I spend my time working in the dental field. I also like to play video games, buy silly outfits for my cat, and cook.

My Wikipedia activities
Wikipedia is implemented in one of my college courses. In my use of Wikipedia, my goal is to try to eliminate any biases made of Wikipedia (like it is unreliable) and try to minimally edit some pages. Thank you for coming on to my page.

Article Evaluation
I visited the Dhampir article on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: lack of citations, unreliable sources, and there are many irrelevant sections.

Structure
The article also has many irrelevant sections. For example, one statement says “In one case, a Serbian widow tried to blame her pregnancy on her late husband, who had supposedly become a vampire”, and “Albanian legends state they have untamed dark or black hair and are very cunning or courageous in nature.”, this violates the NOR policy of Wikipedia.

Conclusion
In conclusion, this article needs improvement. I think violates all of the Wikipedia 4 policies. The information given gives the article a inadequate structure. It needs to update its resources, fix its citations, and remove the NOR statements.