User:Jtaguchi10/Achatinella mustelina/MishaC22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jtaguchi10


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jtaguchi10/Achatinella_mustelina?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Achatinella mustelina

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The lead is short and simple which I liked. It states clearly what the article is going to be about
 * One suggestion I have is maybe remove or reword the last sentence in the distribution section since itʻs very similar to the last sentence in the lead
 * I really like the picture that was used since itʻs very clear and easy to see the snail
 * There is a good amount of sources
 * Another suggestion I have is to maybe add a little caption under the picture

PEER REVIEW RESPONSE (julia)
Hi Misha! Thank you so much for your feedback and taking the time to review my work. I appreciate the suggestions and will definitely take your advice and revise my work with your suggestions in mind. Thanks again!