User:Jtan4/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Human body
 * Article Evaluation
 * In the composition section of the article, all topics have a small paragraph describing what each component of the body does, except for Systems. Since there is only a link to another page, this is a bit inconsistent (other components have links and paragraphs). Also, for the reproductive system, since gametes and sex organs are mentioned I think there should also be some text about meiosis. The article is written in a neutral tone, but when I was looking at some of the sources used for citations, they didn't look like a good source. Some citations are just a website with a definition of a word, and other webpages are not secured and don't have a good design. These may not mean anything, but when I want to determine if a site is trustworthy, those are some factors that I consider.
 * Sources
 * In the reproductive system part, briefly mention meiosis to complement the part about sex organs and gametes. https://www.khanacademy.org/science/biology/cellular-molecular-biology/meiosis/a/phases-of-meiosis
 * More meiosis https://www.livescience.com/52489-meiosis.html

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Core (anatomy)


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is written in neutral tone and covers many things. However, I think the article should include how the core plays a role in exercise as another topic. The core isn't simply just the abs; it plays an important role in and out of the gym. But since there isn't any mention of the usage of the core and exercise in the article, I think there is some content missing in this article.


 * Sources
 * Functions of the core (isometric and concentric) https://fatchfitness.com/concentric-eccentric-isometric-contractions-the-core/
 * Core stability https://www.nationwidechildrens.org/family-resources-education/700childrens/2018/07/core-stability

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Heat Stroke


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has a neutral tone and a lot of the citations are fairly recent. The oldest source is from 2002, but very few sources are this old. The page itself was last edited on September 27 2019. This article has a lot of information but doesn't mention any links to physiology. I think that we could mention what body systems are affected when a person has a heatstroke.


 * Sources
 * https://www.sciencedirect.com/topics/medicine-and-dentistry/heat-stroke
 * https://www.ccohs.ca/oshanswers/phys_agents/heat_health.html

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