User:Jtantillo/High-mountain tea/Mmaley2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jtantillo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jtantillo/High-mountain_tea?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * High-mountain tea

Evaluate the drafted changes
The changes provide a more concise introduction than what is currently written, but keeps the introductory content than provides an opening to the article, explaining what all of the sections will contain. The content is neutral, but the grass-like taste and other flavors could potientally hold bias depending on if it is backed up by a source or not, as this may range from person to person. The source is reliable, and provides support for the content written. Another section talking about the flavor of the tea could be added if enough references are found for it.