User:Jtantillo/High-mountain tea/SoccerTB Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Jtantillo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jtantillo/High-mountain_tea?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * High-mountain tea

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Great start in the sandbox! I think the introduction is good as is and doesn't need help adding more information. I like how you added more detail in your article body to help support information throughout the article. It gives great detail about what else could be added in the article. It adds new detail, not wordy, and great use of a supporting article to help give more information to this article. The content that you added is not bias, viewpoints are greatly neutral, and doesn't heavily persuade people by only giving facts about the production of High-mountain tea. I think while talking about High-mountain tea you can add another subheading to better explain the history and why High-mountain tea if greatly known. I would add a little more to the body and conclusion to help develop this article and make it Wiki standard. I would help explain where you got your new information from like an article, an academic journal, etc.